In English we had to do this task on show don´t tell and this is my work and how I would explain it.
What do you think “show don’t tell” means? I think it means we have to explain what things means by what you see rather than just telling the audience.
How can we re-write these sentences to “show” and not “tell”?
The buildings were tall: Th building were high like birds in the sky.
Sarah was really upset: She was just in bed laying down looking at the roof thinking.
She was so happy to see him: She filled with excitement and starting jumping when she saw him.
The lake was beautiful: The lake was sparkling in the sun and it made me smile.
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