In English we had to think of narrative openings that show what the story is about rather than us just explaining it in words. These are the 5 sentence starters I have thought of.
- One gloomy morning the wind was whistling when I woke up, my alarm was pounding in my head and I just wanted to put my head back on my pillow and fall asleep.
- On this wonderful sunny day when me and my friends were sprinting down the field, smiling and laughing until our body hurt from laughing so hard.
- The fruit was so juicy and ripe, the colour was so bright when we picked them from the bushes and trees.
- I felt so alone sitting on the silent, dark bridge with the wind blowing on my face and the moon shining.
- I smelt the disgusting smell of smoke from my bedroom, when I opened my door I saw a bright and warm substance from the kitchen and yelled for my parents.
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