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Text title: Linda Evangelista says CoolSculpting 'disfigured' her. So, what is it?
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In this article Linda Evangelista got CoolSculpting done and she left really dissapointed and could reconize herself anymore. Basically CoolSculpting is where fat things on your face gets frozen off and it could take multiple visits and multiple months to see a change.For Linda Evangelista it didn't go as planned and when she saw what she looked like she couldn't reconize herself in the mirror.
What is the text about? How do we know? It's about a failed CoolSculpting that happened to Linda Enangelista and how we know that's what the article is about and the title.
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ReplyDeleteHey Danielle,
ReplyDeleteYour story explaining what you read on Stuff was really interesting.
One thing I do wanna help you with next time is to make sure that your words are spelt correctly, and your sentences make sense so the reader can understand. I personally suggest and encourage you to add some photos because I personally think it makes a blogpost a lot more better, so the reader can already have an image of what your story is about. But overall your explanation about what you have read is really interesting.
Hey Danielle,
ReplyDeleteYour story explaining what you read on Stuff was really interesting.
One thing I do wanna help you with next time is to make sure that your words are spelt correctly, and your sentences make sense so the reader can understand. I personally suggest and encourage you to add some photos because I personally think it makes a blogpost a lot more better, so the reader can already have an image of what your story is about. But overall your explanation about what you have read is really interesting.
Hello Danielle I really enjoyed reading your blog post about Cool Sculpting and I liked how you added good information about what is cool sculpting. Next time can you add a image so we know what it looks like or a video that can tell us what it looks like other than that good job on the blog post.
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