In English we had to make write a paragraph using sensory language. Sensory language is like explaining your senses weather the story is real or fake. Here is my paragraph I came up with.
One summer day I could see the pool shimmering when felt the heat of the sun on my body when I went to go to the pool with my friends. The water was a little cold at first but you could get used to it. After a few hours of swimming and chilling with my friends we went to o get lunch, and it looked and tasted so good. After the whole day I felt so tired and went to launch onto my bed and just chill on my phone until I fell asleep.
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