Art

For art we had to make a script for the stop motion movie were making. We are in groups but everyone had to write there own individual script. Today we had to also be in a pair and edit each others work.

Here's my writing:

A few nights ago a family of 6 went to the red rose

to go out because they don’t normally go out

at night with the kids.

Before this night they had never been to the

red rose before and they wanted to see what it’s like.

One reason why they went is because they

heard good things from their other friends and family that had already been there.

When they walked into the red rose building they thought it was really nice, and pretty warm compared to the weather outside.

They went to the cashier to see if they can get a table that has enough room for all of them.

After they got their table, they all looked at the menu and thought of what they were going to get. When they were finished looking at the menu the waiter came and took the order.

After the waiter went away to tell the cooks on what to make, the mum got kind of nervous because something was on her mind about the meal but she didn’t want to tell anyone yet. 

Because they ordered a bit of food to feed their big family.

It took quite a while for there food to come out and when they were sitting they could see the cooks
making the food. The kids started talking to the cooks about the meal because

where they were sitting in the restaurant had a window where the customers could see the food cooking.

The mum was still really nervous about paying for the meal and she felt like she needed to tell someone.

20 minutes later the food came out and the mum finally

told her family why she was acting strange. She told them

because at the time she didn’t have enough money to pay

for what they ordered because it came to $43 and she only had $40 she could spend.

The kids didn’t realise what was going on so they were just acting the same but the dad was also really nervous now and they didn’t know what to do.

They didn’t want to tell the staff their mistake but they

also didn’t want to lie about it.

After 5-10 minutes of deciding what to do they decided it would be better

if they did the right thing and told the staff the mistake they made.

They were both really nervous and asked if they could see the waiter.

When the waiter came over they told her what happened and how they were really nervous.

They thought the waiter would be mad at frustrated at them but she wasn’t really at all.

The waiter said you could come back and pay

the extra $3 or they could ask for her bank details and just get the $3 out of her bank.

She chose to come back when she had the money to pay for the rest of the food.