I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thanks for posting this Danielle, the photo is a little hard to see, but I appreciate that you are likely trying to angle your chromebook to take it. It definitely works better to take the photo outside in the daylight, you will get a better image.
It is really good to see that you used colour and had a go more than one time. If you can send me a better photo, I will be able to say a little more in terms of feedback. Thank you for posting your work.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Thanks for posting this Danielle, the photo is a little hard to see, but I appreciate that you are likely trying to angle your chromebook to take it. It definitely works better to take the photo outside in the daylight, you will get a better image.
ReplyDeleteIt is really good to see that you used colour and had a go more than one time. If you can send me a better photo, I will be able to say a little more in terms of feedback. Thank you for posting your work.